You need to do some screen share action. Show a day, write some things down, explain how it’s quick and accessible which are crucial elements to remembering things. Only use one example for each example - aka “A classmates name” instead of “classmate or co-worker”. I’d use something other than brother example in the middle since you do wife immediately after. I’d do recommendation, favorite quote, song you heard in the grocery store.. “We don’t have an app designed to help us capture any *thing* we want to remember”. Every time you have the word *things* appear on your screen I would add “Simply remember *things*“ or “Stop forgetting *things*“ depending on which you're saying. Aka “*Things* we want to remember“ for the first one. “*Things* we forget every day“. Cut to screen recording when you say “Twos is the first app and website that helps you simply remember *things*“ . I'd maybe just show a day with a couple of things from the example. Name of co-worker, netflix recommendation, wife's favorite flower.. Move a thing to a list, navigate to that list.. That's it.. You don't really need to walk through what you are doing, just show it. And talk about the benefits of remembering things while you do.. Parker's Things Video Feedback. Twos Things video. Potential hooks:. Let’s talk about your things. Do you like forgetting things?. I have some things I want to discuss. We have big things to talk about…or little things. I don’t care what anybody says, your things matter. You want to know some thing?