Items in bold are suggestions for production. Items without bold are script. . Needs to be 2-minutes. “Hello, thank you for downloading Twos. My name is Parker, and I made Twos for you to remember any *thing* from your friend's dog's name to your favorite restaurants all in one place“. Let me show you how.. The sound quality/volume needs to be consistent between the intro and the screen recording. Your day should have some *things* already on it, like 1-2 and maybe connected events. New > Fresh. Need a better example than call mom. Something that we can build a story around. Like something related to building Twos. . “And we all know that getting everything done is nearly impossible. That is why Twos carries over your unfinished to-dos each day“. The same applies to the meeting example. Let's figure out what story we want to tell and tell that story. “To this thing automatically“. I would perform another action on a day or flip between days (with other *things* on those days) while you are talking about days being a quick place to capture *things*. “The second pillar of Twos are lists..lists are“ . I would scroll down your side menu with a list created for groceries, netflix recommendations, favorite quotes while you are talking about the examples of lists. “..and now Joe will be able to search for this list in his Twos, make changes, and share it with other people“. “You can press, hold, and drag to reorder“. LMAO THE TWEET I SHARED IN THE PREVIEW. “Let's say now that my mind is on Italian, I remember I need more pasta from the store“. I would search for “Pasta“ instead of grocery list. A little cooler. We need a cleaner transition to explain the “app and website“ portion, and I would take out all the bennies, like and subscribe, and anything besides “Happy Twosday“ at the end. Maybe tell them they can join our discord from the help to ask any questions.