Joe's what are things feedback
by Parker · 22 things on Twos
- You need to do some screen share action
- Show a day, write some things down, explain how it’s quick and accessible which are crucial elements to remembering things
- Only use one example for each example - aka “A classmates name” instead of “classmate or co-worker”
- I’d use something other than brother example in the middle since you do wife immediately after. I’d do recommendation, favorite quote, song you heard in the grocery store.
- “We don’t have an app designed to help us capture any *thing* we want to remember”
- Every time you have the word *things* appear on your screen I would add “Simply remember *things*" or "Stop forgetting *things*" depending on which you're saying
- Aka "*Things* we want to remember" for the first one
- "*Things* we forget every day"
- Cut to screen recording when you say "Twos is the first app and website that helps you simply remember *things*"
- I'd maybe just show a day with a couple of things from the example. Name of co-worker, netflix recommendation, wife's favorite flower.
- Move a thing to a list, navigate to that list.
- That's it.
- You don't really need to walk through what you are doing, just show it. And talk about the benefits of remembering things while you do.
- ✓ Parker's Things Video Feedback
- ✓ Twos Things video
- Potential hooks:
- Let’s talk about your things
- Do you like forgetting things?
- I have some things I want to discuss
- We have big things to talk about…or little things
- I don’t care what anybody says, your things matter
- You want to know some thing?