First Day Feedback
by Joe · 29 things on Twos
- Need something as catchy as the Albert Einstein quote to start. Possibly the statistic about how often people forget things.
- Haha a little less ominous of a "hi"
- Twos is an app and website that helps you simply remember things
- We all know what it is like to forget someone's name, and important date, or that restaurant we want to try but can never remember when it's time to eat
- Pick the last example, i'd love to help.
- "Or the funny joke your uncle told you"
- We forget these things because our things are spread all over the place...apple notes, sticky notes blah blach
- Need you to move over to the side of the tapestry
- Possibly better examples than notes from a meeting, random to-dos, etc.
- "New" instead of fresh I think
- Explain that Twos uses AI before showing the example so they know what to expect and lock in.
- Maybe bake out a little more of the story of the airport pickup before just jotting that example down
- Should we use Loom for this video?
- Tell people you love oatmeal so you have always wanted to open the greatest oatmeal restaurant of all time, then explain that is something you are going to write down
- We could even clip in the eating oatmeal video
- "You can also easily keep track of to-dos by typing open bracket, closed bracket, space"
- Have a couple more to-dos in your to-dos view to show how they spread from all across the app
- "Since today is the quickest place to write things down, we also want to make it quick for you to get back to today anywhere in the app"
- "While today is the quickest place to write things down you want to remember, you can also easily organize your things by creating a list"
- Let's use 3 list examples - Tv show recommendations (I know this is not what it says but say recs), a list of things you need to pick up at the store, and even a list for things you want to remember about people
- Let's make a new list for my roommate and co-founder, Joe
- Now we'll write down some things we want to remember about Joe... "Likes to sing in the shower" and a to-do "buy earplugs"
- Now since buying earplugs is not something I want to remember about Joe, I can select and move this thing to my "Walmart" list
- And I can collaborate on my walmart list with Joe - so he can add things that we need for the apartment in real time
- *Show move again, via swipe to select* - Now let's say we leave the house and think of two more things we need to buy from WalMart.
- "There is a lot more to Twos that make it the quickest, easiest, and most organized place to write, remember, and share things - but stay tuned by subscribing to our channel because more videos are coming twos you soon"
- Should we be talking about free download and that stuff since this is going out to people who have already signed up?
- How can we get them to share the video with others...
- Thank you and happy twosday