Get rid of the first graphic of the woman. I want to hear what you’re saying, not be distracted. Get rid of the Fry graphic. Just the old man and monopoly man. Remove backgrounds on monopoly man and old guy. Put Twos on the right side of the video, dump the little guy with the string around his finger. You writing “bananas” is kinda confusing. Should maybe be something you’ve done, thought about, or nothing written until showing off the move feature. Spend more time on your Mon Nov 7, 2016. Didn’t get enough time to analyze what was going on. I’m thinking you should stack up your list on the screen. Days. Things. Lists. All on the screen by the third thing. If you’re going to pause on move, use the “swap” feature for Picture in Picture. Search for “grocery list” not bananas. Don’t use the Twos graphic at 1:18. Just the snoopy graphic with background removed on the right side. No graphics of App Store or desktop, just the text on the bottom of the screen and make it a little more pronounced.